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A Valentine for Death by ~amelye:iconamelye:



But why, oh why
Must we die and die
When there's nothing at all
To live for?

And who, oh who
Will save us from you
When you come a-knockin'
On our door?

And you will
Make our pain still
But won't the world turn black
The fire burn out in our core?
©2007-2009 ~amelye
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:iconraularosemena:
There is always something to live for.. like for your self..
I like it, pretty deep. Sometimes I have fell like the world stop turning, but never stops.. always continue

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
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>>" what u dont like yourself???
yeh..i've had that comment quite a few times.."deep"
lol..but yes, it is "deep" because, i actually uhh..."put feeling" into my poems. =)
of course the world doesnt stop. but you can just stop moving along with it :3

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:iconraularosemena:
Of course I like my self.. Why do you say that? What Im trying to say is that sometimes we think, that because we lost somebody, we cant continue living.. And what im saying is that we have to five for ourself, sometimes there´s nothing around us, but we have to continue for ours self, because we matter. That´s all.
Some people are afraid of showing what they feel, but you put that into poems and show that to the world.. so you are like an open person, is like you show your true colors.. so I think is cool

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
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...typo. srysrysry.
i meant "what if you dont like yourself?"
and what if you dont think you matter? and you dont have any reason to live? or the pain is too much? or you just dont want to live? what if you have fought, but its just too much?
=O not really. im not an open person...at least not in real life. kinda...i dont really know...because i guess my view of myself is different than how my friends see me .__.

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:iconraularosemena:
Well of course I have feel that way, sometimes... and sometimes I say to other people stuff, to help them a bit,when they are down, but not necesary I believe in the things im saying to them, I want to believe everything would be ok, but not always is that easy.
The pain can be to much, but we can not give up.. we have to hold on, believe that a new day may come, and we can be happy then.. You know, there are people that really dosent have anything, that have to look in the garbage to find something to eat, or worst, they really dont have anything, but they continue, they survive.. so sometimes I think in that kind of persons, and see that my problems are not that bad.
Sooo how do your friends see you? Do you think the impresion they have of you is wrong?

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
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but giving up can make all the pain go away.
but they have something to live for. for their family, or their friends. or like you said, the hope that better days will come. but some people dont have anything to live for. or they feel that they dont...
well..i dont think they see the real me..=)
and i do a lot of stupid stuff that gives people the wrong impression, when i dont really feel that way .__.

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:iconraularosemena:
Yes.. but the thing Im saying is that you should not give up on live.. give up on people that hurts you, yes, but continue living. We are not really so alone as we think we are. well but of course there are people that are really alone, and dont have anything.. but life is a Precious gif, we should not abandon that easy.
So what type of stupid stuff do you do?? lol

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
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but what if there's no way to escape the pain other than death?
but its all a mental thing. of course we're not alone, but we can feel like it.
what may be a gift to some, may be a curse to others, you know.
hmm. well, i say/do stuff that is really...mean..?

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:iconraularosemena:
Yes I understand your point.. and is true.. but what if you reach out for help, you would find it for sure. There are like Places to help people, like foundations, or stuff.. or maybe why not the church, or a school teacher, there still are good people in this world, hard to find it, maybe, but there are. If someone comes to me, asking for help, I would try to help, or get some help for him.
You know, you say really interesting stuff, you are an inteligent person, is good to questions this things, and to try to find answers. lol.
So you say you are a mean girl? like call names to others, or dont socialize with some girl because she is not that "COOL", or because she is not that pretty as you are ??

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
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not always. help's not always there for everyone.
they would have to help a lot of people.
and you can't always trust your teacher. and the church probably wont be able to help you. they can listen, but they can't help you.
him? that's so sexist, lol. and would you really? you can say this type of thing, but if you were put into that kind of situation, you might change your mind.
mmm, not really. and my vocab is very limited. my friend, and she's a year younger than me, knows way more than me =)
yeah, i always do that >>" and there's never one specific answer to these types of questions.
mmm, not really a "mean girl" but..i just sometimes do things that i really regret later on..
omg no! i dont do those things. but my ex-best friend did that...we'd always go like "you're really pretty." and "no, im not pretty, im ugly. but you're pretty!" and on and on.
and then one day she went "ok, fine. you are ugly. and i only hang out with pretty people. looks are everything. if i like a guy, it's only because he's really cute. if i make friends, it's with pretty people. i dont care about people's personalities or anything. its all about looks! and even though you're ugly, i'll make an exception for you. i can hang out with you. =)" ...>>" i can't believe she actually said that.
and i dont care how people look, mainly because, i, myself, am utterly hideous. :3
and...i dont like the popular people, personally. they act so spoiled and mean, its just ridiculous.

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