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i called for you

but you did not come

the air a-buzz

the wasps a-humm

waiting to sting you

back to life

like needles

pinpricking

your heart

you screamed in pain

remembering with a start

why you wanted to sleep

sleep away the memories

with tears

rolling down your face
©2007-2009 ~amelye
:iconamelye:

Author's Comments

Wake up, wake up.
Come back for me.
And then we can sup,
Like a happy family.

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:iconraularosemena:
Sooo good, but is like a sad.. story.. I like sad story's.
This poem is something that have to do with you?

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
:iconamelye:
mmm, tq.
it is supposed to be sad.
most of my things are. =)
uhm...i dont know...

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:iconraularosemena:
uhm..yes, I like sad things, well is not that I like, but it have a much strong impresion on me, like a sad movi, I like it more, than a happy movie with a happy ending..
But life is supose to be happy, remember that, and can be happy.

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
:iconamelye:
yeah, i guess...and sad endings do make a bigger impression >>"
life is supposed to be happy? when its filled with so many things like pain, sadness, heartbreak, starvation, etc?

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:iconraularosemena:
You know.. im gona give up on you.. lol just kidding.
Of course there are bad things in life, like the ones your are saying, but there are also good things.
Your family for example, they love you for sure, not every time they know how to say that to you, or to demostrate it.
You can find a good boyfriend, that really care about you, and makes you happy.
A dog, can give you happy moments.
The day you give birth to a child, those are happy moments.
The day a boyfrind you really love ask you to married him.
In life, are happy, and sad momments.
We just have to seek, good people, be around good people, honest ones.. and maybe all our enviromet will get better.

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
:iconamelye:
mmm. if i had a dollar everytime someone said that...
yes, the bad things obviously outweigh the good things.
and its a bigger chance that there will be bad things in your life than good things. we can only hope so long...
but not all families love each other. thats why people divorce and disown.
hah. like a guy would ever love me?
i've had a dog. but then i lost it after a week.
and how can you know who is a good person? honest people? if they were liars, they could fake being honest, couldnt they?

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:iconraularosemena:
you know.. Im never gonna win with you... looooool
I dont know if the bad things overweight the good things.. but there are good moments for sure. and you can live happy years, and then something bad happends.. thats life.
Not all families love each other, there are parents also, but sons, in this world there is all kinds of people,and yes is like you say, we can only hope for the better.
Why a guy will not love you?? because you are soooo ugly?? come on thats not true.
You lost your dog after a week? lol, that is soooo you looool ( just kidding )
And of course the people calling names to others are not good honest people.. But normal people, people that are good with their parents, good with his sisters, that respects his teachers.. dont know, sometimes you can tell, but of course you can be wrong.

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
:iconamelye:
=) no you wont. trust me.
exactly. thats life. and life sucks. that's why people commit suicide or take drugs or drink, etc.
but that hope has to give out sometime. and some people get lucky and others dont. they're hope gives out and they dont have any more reason to live.
mmhmm. im ugly, inside and out.
o____o huh? i had a cat too. and fish.
maybe thats just a wall, trying to block other people from getting in by creating pain for others.
there's not many people like that. only a few people in the whole world would match your outline for a "good and honest" person.

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:iconraularosemena:
The day I win, that day the world would end or something..
hsve you seen the movi persue of happiness with will smith? Is a really good movi, the guy losses everything, and start living in the streets with his kid, but never give up.. you sould see it.
And plz stop saying you are ugly, inside out, For what i can say, for the little things we have chat, I can say you are not a ugly person, you are funny, and interesting, buy you allready know what i think.
So you dont have any animals right know?
Most of the people, put a wall, in some way or the other..
your wall I think is saying you are ugly, maybe because if someone, some idiot, comes to you and say that to you, you would not matter, because you already think that of your self.

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La felicidad del hombre no esta en las relaciones humanas, sino en todas las cosas.. Una playa solitaria, un bosque olvidado.
:iconamelye:
=) yeh, you'll win when i can go snowboarding in hell.
btw, can you ski or snowboard?
oh, i've heard of it, but i havnt watched it.
mmm, some people are like that.
but most people arent.
fine, i'll stop saying im ugly, but i'll keep thinking it. =)
...fish. >>" you?
actually, yes. there's this guy and he always insults me and goes "you're so stupid" and i go "...mm, yes i am. thank you =)" and then he gets pissed...

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